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Chased and comfort
PostPosted: 06/14/2005 7:31 AM Reply with quote
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If they chase you
please don’t cry
just get on your feet and do what you have to do
fly
baby fly away
you know I will be here with open arms
don’t look back
they may see you
you can come
and you can stay here at my place where you’re safe

You may think I am a liar
just like the rest
but that ain’t true so please don’t hesitate
to come thru the blue
just fly over here
even if it’s gonna take you time
please fly here tonight
even if they are after you

you will find a Love
a pretty Love
‘cause there is more
in the World
than evil and hate
than those despots
whose history
will show them the truth

I know you’re hurting
but don’t let it stop you
I know you are in pain
but it is worth a try
Honey, I want you to come
I will take you in my arms
and I will comfort you

Comfort you
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Re: Chased and comfort
PostPosted: 06/14/2005 10:05 PM Reply with quote
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This poem seems like it should be in a song.  Have you tried to write any tunes to go with your poems, Spider???

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Re: Chased and comfort
PostPosted: 06/23/2005 6:42 PM Reply with quote
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Yes NR. I have tried to put music to some of my poetry but I end up sounding like somone else (Dylan, Wiehe, Lennon, Willie Nelson, Cash, Hank Williams) and it doesn't feel as if it's me anymore... I want to have my own way and can't find it. Which is a great line for another poem one day!
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Re: Chased and comfort
PostPosted: 06/23/2005 9:08 PM Reply with quote
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The Spider from Mars wrote:
I want to have my own way and can't find it.

That sounds like a line from a Country and Western song!  I bet you would make a good Country singer...

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