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I cannot go on thinking
I haven't been prepared for you.
My mind tells me
I've been secretly waiting.
Your eyes distract me
in their subtle moments of passion.
I secretly lose my mind
deep inside myself,
somehow avoiding the loss of control
with your presence haunting me,
yet I can ask for nothing more.
I see everything in you...
everything I love, everything I crave,
so I will continue about my day
and then go to bed....
all the while with you in mind. |
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Posted: 11/12/2005 9:26 PM |
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That's very good SE. I can really relate to a lot of your poetry, I think that's because you speak of thoughts and feelings that are universal.
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Posted: 11/13/2005 4:20 AM |
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He sounds like a very special companion, SE...
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Posted: 11/13/2005 11:26 AM |
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lol... he is. Thank you both for your feedback. |
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Posted: 11/13/2005 5:01 PM |
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I'm happy for you SE...
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Wow, i love that one! |
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Posted: 11/14/2005 8:18 AM |
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Posted: 11/14/2005 6:51 PM |
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wow... thank you
Nightrider... this companion of mine is actually only a friend, but I have never loved anyone like this before or felt this way... He is part of the long story that I haven't discussed yet. |
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Posted: 11/15/2005 3:39 AM |
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I'm glad that you have found someone who is so special for you. I just hope he feels the same for you. As always, you don't have to answer but, is there a future in this relationship???
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Posted: 11/16/2005 9:23 PM |
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No. I screwed that up. The most horrible way that anyone could and I feel like an ass for doing so. |
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