| Somewhere Someone's Died | |
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No one will notice the death
no funeral will be held
no message in the obituary column
it is someone no one knows
someone buried so deep in secrets
so deep that it has become impossible to catch a breath
someone so scared of being hurt
that she hid her face
whenever someone was near
someone so guilt-ridden
that she felt she deserved to die
someone so caring that each harsh word
seeped deep into her very soul
someone who needed and deserved
all the love in the world
someone who got none
someone who gave and gave
but never took a single thing
someone who went on loving
regardless of how many times she was burned
someone who lost all hope
someone who couldn't go on
someone who couldn't live without love
someone who was murdered by everyone
someone who died a meaningless death
that 'someone' was my heart |
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| Somewhere Someone's Died | |
Posted: 11/08/2005 6:50 PM |
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Powerful. I love the poem because it touches my very soul and helps to make me feel freed. Rizzo you have talent!
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| Somewhere Someone's Died | |
Posted: 11/09/2005 12:46 AM |
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I believe in reincarnation so I think there is hope for that "someone", your heart. This poem makes me sad, but also offers me hope that things can only improve from this point on. It certainly can't get any worse, that's for sure...
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| Somewhere Someone's Died | |
Posted: 11/09/2005 11:18 AM |
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| Re: Somewhere Someone's Died | |
Posted: 11/09/2005 8:35 PM |
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*sniff* you guys are just great... |
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