| Dancing on the moon (To Susan) or Waltz for Susan | |
Posted: 10/31/2005 5:46 AM |
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Her silky face against my mouth
I wish I could have it the rest of my life
but things are not as static
as we tend to think when in love
The bird upon my shoulder
is singing one of the songs
that I asked to be sung at one time
but not by the peaceful dove
I have her hand in mine
She looks at me and smiles
We both are walking slow
and no one can tell us to run
She kiss my cheek so softly
I suck it up out of greed
the heart is beating fast
her face is facing the sun
I’ll take her to the moon
where my friends are having fun
she doubts a while but then gives in
The bus is leaving now
We go to the party up there
where everyone sits still
but we go up and start to dance
but please don’t ask me how |
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| Re: Dancing on the moon (To Susan) or Waltz for Susan | |
Posted: 10/31/2005 8:24 AM |
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Lovely.... Sounds like a sincere love affair....I can hear the music... keep dancing |
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| Dancing on the moon (To Susan) or Waltz for Susan | |
Posted: 10/31/2005 9:42 AM |
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Thank you Katy!
And Happy Halloween! Don't get tricked now...
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| Dancing on the moon (To Susan) or Waltz for Susan | |
Posted: 10/31/2005 1:17 PM |
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A beautiful love poem, Spider. Mrs Spider is very lucky to have someone to write poetry that she has inspired.
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| Dancing on the moon (To Susan) or Waltz for Susan | |
Posted: 10/31/2005 3:24 PM |
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This is a nice and touching poem. Thanks for sharing it with us Spider...
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