| It is not fair | |
Posted: 10/25/2005 3:52 AM |
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Isn’t it strange
to see the woman in her wig changing lanes
to see the man in his suite turning away
Isn’t it strange?
It’s mighty weird
to see a man with his ears that can not hear
to see the sister of the man feeling fear
It’s mighty weird
I am shocked
by the woman in her panties and a frog
by her sister in law getting mugged
I am shocked
There’s some dirt
on the paper that we thought was from the earth
on the rich man’s Armani white shirt
There’s some earth
Oh, come on
give a break to those who feel so far away gone
to those who has no one
Oh, come on |
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Posted: 10/25/2005 4:27 AM |
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interesting... did u do this? its makin me think, i have ot reread this again tomorrow when ive had some sleep:) |
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| It is not fair | |
Posted: 10/25/2005 4:49 AM |
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Spider writes all his own poetry. Good isn't it?
It's a bit easier to understand if you're a few sheets to the wind. Like you said, I have to read it a few times. Each time I get a different meaning from it.
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Posted: 10/25/2005 7:32 AM |
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Peggysue wrote:
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interesting... did u do this? its makin me think, i have ot reread this again tomorrow when ive had some sleep:)
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Yes all my lyrics/poetry are mine. I don't steal... LOL! Just a little...
If you know about a publisher, let me know!
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Posted: 10/25/2005 7:51 AM |
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well im happy after 1.5 hrs sleep i didnt come back to a wiseass comment... i just didnt know if his wife, parent or friened wrote them n he was bein protective of it...
rosie, hmmmm maybe ill have a few tonite n write my own, im good at poetry always was.. i just get so dam slap happy when im here i can barely type lol peg looks for that swing
howsabout another drink? lol i have till 330 pm n its 830 am now |
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Posted: 10/25/2005 8:24 AM |
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| It is not fair | |
Posted: 10/25/2005 9:08 AM |
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| It is not fair | |
Posted: 10/25/2005 11:58 AM |
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Peggy if you write poetry I would love to read some!!! By all means post all the poetry you want.
Spider and Katy so far have been the only ones keep The Poetry Corner alive. Other than now the one posted by Aussie.
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| It is not fair | |
Posted: 10/25/2005 4:10 PM |
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Abstract, but concise. That was interesting Spider. I can't wait until you give us the musical version...
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