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Mm I can’t get
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| Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/04/2005 5:29 PM |
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Somehow I had missed this one. I don't remember reading it. I like the way it reads. As always with your poetry, Spider, many meanings come to mind, always changing.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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| Re: Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/16/2005 9:46 PM |
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| Hmmm... I love the concept of this poem. Do you happen to write songs as well? |
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| Re: Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/18/2005 3:50 PM |
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Hmmm... I love the concept of this poem. Do you happen to write songs as well?
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I've tried but you know it ain't easy... YOu know how hard it can be...
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| Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/18/2005 11:44 PM |
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I missed this one too. How is that possible that we both missed it, rb???
This is an interesting style and rhythm. What does it mean Spider? It does sound like the kind of poem that we might hear in a song someday...
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| Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/19/2005 12:18 AM |
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How is that possible that we both missed it, rb???
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Not sure but could have been busy for several hours at the time and the fact that the unread markers go away whenever they feel like it even if you haven't read the post hasn't helped any.
No one has come up with a fix for that yet? It really doesn't seem to happen as often as it used to. Course that could be because I have RCF open almost all the time some days. Even if I go to town. LOL
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| Re: Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/19/2005 1:45 AM |
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| Nightrider wrote:
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What does it mean Spider?
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Honestly I have to answer like the professionals (Bob Dylan); It means whatever you want it to mean...
It's hard to tell what your thoughts mean... There may be a lot of meanings. I never think about the meaning although I have a meaning. But that is only mine. Those who read it may find something else in it and that is what I hope they do. It's positive if my poems have a lot of meanings...
Yes, there is a rhythm to it. I try to make my poems music poems so I can put music to them. Unfortunately I haven't been able to do that successfully yet. Sometimes I just write down words though without any rhythm. But I like when I manage to get a rhuthm to it! I did this time!
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| Re: Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/19/2005 1:48 PM |
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| rb2d2xp wrote:
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How is that possible that we both missed it, rb???
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Not sure but could have been busy for several hours at the time and the fact that the unread markers go away whenever they feel like it even if you haven't read the post hasn't helped any.
No one has come up with a fix for that yet?
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Actually there is a fix for it if Nightrider decided he wanted to install it, either here or here. |
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| Posted: 11/20/2005 2:51 AM |
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Ptirhiik's MOD has been adopted by my friend Alan (asinshesq). That MOD won't really work for us though. If you notice, the first column that usually appears on other boards is missing on our's...
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| Re: Please don't copy this without asking me! | |
| Posted: 11/23/2005 10:04 PM |
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lol.. yes, i know how hard writing a song is, but you seem to have a viable rhythm... you could work with this.  |
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