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Posted: 09/29/2005 11:36 AM |
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That I was not you first choice
Is something I always knew.
But the whole world was aware
That I was in love with you.
We raised a lovely family
Now there's grandkids too.
So much to be proud of
But you still remain aloof.
I did it all to make you happy
Catering to your every desire.
But somehow it's not enough
to quell you past loves fire.
I'd hoped my burning love for you
Would someday open your heart
And I would feel your love returned
No longer to feel so far apart.
You just go through the motions
And it's a bitter pill to take.
I know you are not to blame
For the chioces that we make.
But I see you staring into space
And your heart it is not free.
But with the one you really love
Your dreams are not of me.
Your living with a long time memory
Of what should or could have been
.Has left me with a broken heart
that will never be whole again.
Mary kay Sawyers
I always wanted to put this to music wirh the first verse as the Chorus.. But lacking any musical talent... I guess it will remain a poem |
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Posted: 09/29/2005 1:33 PM |
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I think it would make a great song! I've seen ads where you can have your lyrics put to music for a fee. Course you don't have much choice about the music and I don't know how professonal it would be.
I know someone that had it done but that was a long time ago and I don't remember the details, he got a record with a label that gave the name of the song, who wrote the music and who wrote the words. Kinda neat little memento if nothing else. You can frame and hang it on the wall, tell people "Look, I'm on record!" LOL Course this was back when they were still making records. LOL
Try asking at this forum
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Posted: 09/29/2005 3:46 PM |
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This would make a great song, Katy. I hope this isn't a true story though. This is a sad story...
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Posted: 09/30/2005 7:28 AM |
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I hope this isn't a true story though. NR
It is a true story, but not mine... She was a dear friend the type you almost know their joy and pain even though she never complained... She came across it one day and it brought her to tears. She knew it was her.. She cried for several days and I let her cry it out... I was afraid I lost a friend but she finally got back to herself... She's gone now and that's the reason I can show it..
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Posted: 09/30/2005 5:22 PM |
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I'm happy to hear that this isn't your personal story Katy. I can understand the tears when your friend read this. I can't imagine why that would have threatened your friendship though...
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