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You stare at me with vacant eyes, bloodshot and tired.
Your veins, waiting and open.
I cannot help you, not anymore.
You choose not to help yourself.
Instead, you seek your prey by devious means.
I have been in your place, never again.
The moon is my only addiction now,
my lover, in hypnotic ways.
I pity you in the state you keep.
I cannot help you by helping you...
not anymore. |
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Posted: 07/19/2008 5:47 PM |
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There is a lot of wisdom and living in that poem for so young a person.
Very well said, sweet_entropy.
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Posted: 07/19/2008 7:46 PM |
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thank you... i've experienced too much in my lifetime as it is.. i feel a lot older than 21. but hey, mistakes are mistakes. |
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Posted: 07/19/2008 8:11 PM |
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Absolutely. That's the way we learn and grow and acquire wisdom. At least that's the way it's suppose to work but in the case of some people they just tend to compound their mistakes.
Endlessly ....
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Posted: 07/19/2008 11:22 PM |
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but in the case of some people they just tend to compound their mistakes.
Endlessly ....
rb are you talking about me??? |
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Posted: 07/20/2008 8:15 AM |
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NO! Gee purple, I don't even know you. LOL
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Posted: 07/21/2008 10:15 AM |
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Very nice SE and purple, if not for the mistakes life would have been very dull indeed...And welcome Purple |
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Posted: 07/22/2008 11:28 AM |
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Thank you Katy, it's nice to be here and everyone has been very helpful and friendly. Do write your own poetry at all?
rb, I was just teasing you I knew you weren't referring to me -but unfortunately it fits to a T. |
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Posted: 07/24/2008 9:46 AM |
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Hi purplehugs, yes i do write poetry and some is posted at this site |
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