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Posted: 06/25/2007 11:01 AM |
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I wrote this to a boyfriend
Back when I was a 'teen
With a very broken heart
And recovery not seen
My pain is worse than your's
No one else can hurt this much
Nobody's tears can sting so bad
As my face they sharply touch.
Nobody had ever loved anyone
As intensely as I cared for you
And the hurt you've caused me
Is exclusive to only a very few.
I will never be able to recover
To be happy and whole again
My heart is forever broken
It will never be able to mend.
I will never ever love again
You've erased all my desire
I just might as well end it all
Put me on the funeral pyre.
This note all came back to me
As I ran into him yesterday
Now that it's 58 years later
We didn't have much to say
He had to introduce himself
I didn't recognize him at all
We tried to have a conversation
But it was mostly just a lull.
How very important things are
When you are only seventeen
All the best is yet to come but
In your young mind its not seen.. |
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| Re: Young Love | |
Posted: 06/25/2007 2:12 PM |
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It is amazing at how some things seem so important at the moment, but years later, they hold almost no value. Wouldn't it be nice if we could fast forward after a traumatic event to see that things will probably turn out just fine in the end???
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Posted: 06/25/2007 2:26 PM |
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How very very true, Katy. Well said. Beautifully so.
Thank you for sharing a moment from your past.
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