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PostPosted: 05/20/2006 6:45 PM Reply with quote
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When we wake up the sun will shine
in our eyes so bright and so clear
You wonder if it will stay like that always
All I can say is no my dear

The sun has to sleep just like you and me
She will go hidin’ for a few
But she is faithful and will always come back
So you will see her smile again at you

Smile, my dear just smile
There is no reason to be sad
Smile, my dear just smile
The sun is good and warm, there is no reason to be sad
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Sounds very good so far.  I like it.



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Ah, this sounds like the beginning of a sad story.  I hope by the end of the poem, the lover will be drawn out of her depression...

Crying or Very sad
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Chemtrails on my Mind byCleverfishlady

From where ever you are sleeping, the sun may shine so clear
each morning when birds awaken to sing their songs of cheer.

But lately when I look up from the horizon... then to the sky
all one see's now are chemtrails daily strewn above many pairs of eyes.

Most days they start flying early, sometimes three abreast or five..
Across the horizon silently they vapor trail my sky.
Their frozen crystalline trails are continuously long and a bit more wide.

It takes only 10-15 minutes for these whispy veils to spread
parallel or checker board they float above our heads.

By sunset they've expanded  making a quiet & beautiful sight
of tiny gray aluminum & barium particles that float with great delight.

Few who look upward notice all there is to really see...
I ask around to find out why ever this could be.

The only reason so far for covering the sun...
is because the polluted air around us is altering too much above.
Holes in the ozone layer are just the tip of what's begun.

When the rains & wind come to blow it all away... sadly what really happens is their relocation, by the way.

Our Mother earth is saddened & desparate to remove what
toxins we've created when sadly convenience has gone askew.

fish If you can write a happy ending you are invited to try to. fish
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Cleverfishlady!  You write poetry?! Shocked  That's fantastic!

I hope to see more of your work here. sunny  

I hope there IS a happy ending to your poem.


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Great work you too
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That is really good CFL.  I wish I could write like that...  Applause

Every time I fly, I am amazed at how brown the air is and how far it goes.  There seems to be no end to it.  As a kid, I remember brilliant colors at sunset.  Now it seems that the colors are dimmed and less photogenic.  I'm amazed that few people care about doing anything about this.  You can only pee in the pool so long before it is too nasty to swim in.  I imagine in the near future, our atmosphere will be too toxic to breath if something isn't done to reverse what we are doing to it...

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Thanks everyone! I  like to write & have not been doing much poetry-wise, but this one just  came to me more easily.

Creativity  comes from the right  side of  your  brain. ANd EVERYONE has inbelieveable talent & CAN DRAW, only our  schools have  not  cared to promote this.
There is a great book written called Drawing From the Right Side of the Brain . It is still very much in print, in paperback. I bought the copy of it from the library since it was not bothering my allergies to inks. I got lucky.

After reading looking at the drawings including  a section showing examples of  before & after drawings by  the same person who thought they could not draw.. and their first attempt was very primitive.. it was shocking to see the immense difference aftclasses taken, given by the author!

THe book shows how th do proportions, 3-d shading, percpective &  how to do things correctly.  Heck, I went to college & this was never mentioned.


Get this book &  then  see what happens to your ability to  draw!!
The sky is not  what it one was, Night rider. You are right about that.  

I am told this chemtrail phenomenon is happening  all over the globe.


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