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Lying together in the bed
naked warmth against naked warmth
light flashes and shadows stir
everything else is peacefully still
gentle breath brushes flushed cheek
hands stroke trembling hands
caressing shivering thoughts
emotions cascade down bodies
drawn into a world of two
eyes see only each other
bodies feel only the other
they can get no closer
innermost thoughts have reached the edge
time has stopped
the world does not exist |
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| Naked Warmth | |
Posted: 11/09/2005 8:49 PM |
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Ahhhhh..... that is so lovely.
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Posted: 11/09/2005 9:19 PM |
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Thought i better post a happy one so you guys didn't think i was miserable! |
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| Naked Warmth | |
Posted: 11/09/2005 9:30 PM |
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LOL, I never thought you were miserable, Rizzo. I know that moods and deep feelings of sadness, loneliness or pain can last only hours or even minutes, all though one's life.
What amazes me is the ability you have of putting feelings and emotions into poetic words so well.
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| Naked Warmth | |
Posted: 11/10/2005 3:49 AM |
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Yes, I like this one Rizzo because it shows a different angle of yourself from what you have showed us thus far...
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