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The Rose
PostPosted: 11/03/2005 6:12 PM Reply with quote
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I smiled
the rose
surrounded by crinkly brown paper
so perfect it was
the shading so red
the shadowing just right

Over time it changed
the edges curling
the petals browning
the head bowed
sad and forlorn
a few petals strewn around

So i finished what had been started
slowly
tearing it apart
one petal by one painful petal
till the bleeding stalk was all that remained
a sad reminder
of what had died

© Kirsty 2005
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The Rose
PostPosted: 11/03/2005 8:30 PM Reply with quote
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You're toying with my emotions here Rizzo.  First you bring me up, only to leave me in a pool of tears....

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Your writing style seems similar to Katy's.  Is there a name for that type of style???

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The Rose
PostPosted: 11/03/2005 9:15 PM Reply with quote
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Wow, Kirsty, that's good.



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Re: The Rose
PostPosted: 11/04/2005 8:30 AM Reply with quote
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Very Nice Rizzo
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Re: The Rose
PostPosted: 11/04/2005 5:04 PM Reply with quote
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I don't know anything about poetry, so don't know what the 'style' is - i'm sure it must have a name!

Thanks for the compliments Smile I've not shared my poetry before. I'll go dig another one out...
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